Brat
Zat, 02/02/2019 - 13:32
I'll harness the fastest troika
Of my dark mane steads -> This is rather funny when you don't know any Russian (it should be "dark-mane steeds", for sure)
As soon as I'll see->As soon as I see (beware of the grammar) ;)
Do not loose the golden days -> Tighten'em up, instead ;) (I'd rather use "waste" )
While curls not grey and boring -> While curls aren't grey and boring
Nonetheless, your translation is a good one, though it made me laugh a bit.
michelemisha
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Anatoli Trojanowski