Le Vent - превод на енглески

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Le Vent

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Le Vent

The Wind

The wind that sings,

The wind that dances,

The wind will save me,

It will save me from the women

Who want to kill me

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This work has been done by Don Juan. In case you want to use it elsewhere, please ask for permission - if given, my username and the URL of the page where you got my translation must be always mentioned. If I find my works being reprinted without permission or that reference, I will request for it to be removed.

Don Juan

постављено 2 јун 2012 - 15:38

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Torpedo23

20 Dec 2021, 00:58

[@Alma Barroca]
Hey Juan,
Nice short poem here (:
All looks good!
Just so you know: for "le vent me sauvera," you do not need the "that" (adding it actually changes the meaning slightly). You could simply write "the wind will save me."
Best,
- Torp

Don Juan A

20 Dec 2021, 22:19

Hey, Torp. Merci beaucoup pour votre commentaire et pour les étoiles. This was one of my first translations, only gave a try because it's short and not complex (which is basically the reason why I do not translate from French that often). I've updated my translation now even though a 'that' is all that was changed xD.

The best!

Torpedo23

20 Dec 2021, 22:56

De rien, de rien (:
You deserve those stars!

Yes, I was surprised at first when I found out you had done a French to English translation. But I figured the length of it encouraged you to give it a try (and that was a nice one, so congrats!)
If you ever want to give it another try with another "not complex" text (for a French to English or English to French translation), you can always do so, tag it for proofreading, and let me and other Francophone users know; I'd be happy to proofread if needed (but yes, I know, you're skeptical - it does take a lot to dare translate in one's '3rd' or '4th' language!)

See you 'round,
- Torp

Don Juan A

20 Dec 2021, 23:56

Torpedo23 је написао/ла:

If you ever want to give it another try with another "not complex" text (for a French to English or English to French translation)

Tell that to Céline Dion's complex French lyrics, which always leave me at a loss xD At least it's practice anyway. Thanks for your feedback and for your kind and always welcome help :)

Torpedo23

21 Dec 2021, 00:09

Aaaah! So you'd be more likely to translate songs you already know and enjoy... (that makes sense)
But midway through, you realize it looked "easy" but is actually overwhelmingly complex to translate? :/
That's happened to me, too, sadly. That's why it's better to fully analyze the text before attempting to translate it, to gauge whether it'd be an enjoyable challenge or a stressful nightmare :p

Sometimes you can be pleasantly surprised by randomly browsing translation requests. Maybe that's something you could try one of these days? I know that I've found some gems by checking the transcription/translation requests more than once!

No problem - always happy to lend a hand when able (:

Torpedo23

20 Dec 2021, 01:00

Straightforward translation (:
Thanks for posting, Juan!