Hi Sciera!
Here are a few suggestions to improve your English:
Title: [Purple Clouds] or [Lilac-Colored Clouds]
1st verse, line 2: cooling my head [on] (or) [against] the window[ pane].
line 6: We meet our friends and forget [the] day,
line 7: (We) don't want any hassles or pressure
line 8: we take a [drag] ** (clearly implied).
line 10 – red [bumps] (or) [runs] into blue
line 12: and above us, [purple] (or) [lilac-colored] clouds pass us by in the night.
Chorus:
Line 1: We’ll stay awake until the clouds are [purple] (or) [lilac-colored] again.
Line 3: see line 1.
Line 6: Kleinlichkeit: I would use “in spite of”
Line 7: [We’re breaking ourselves free from all the strings] (or)[We’re tearing all the strings away from us]
2nd verse:
line 3: We’ll [split/break] the world apart…
line 4: from plans and dreams – new every day.
line 5: a little money for [problems/difficulties]
line 7: (we) want [it] to be more
line 9: Don't tell me the []many big names you know. * “oh so” isn’t needed, it takes away from the message.
line 10: [We’ll gild our paper cups] or [ we’ll have our paper cups gilded.]
lines 11 and 12: we’ll party hard, and [take] a soft landing on the [purple/lilac-colored] clouds.
Chorus: see above.
3rd Verse:
Line 1: Can’t you sleep either?
Line 2: Can’t close your eyes either?
Line 4: I’m feeling just like you.
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