Hola Tom:
Te dejo algunas sugerencias que mejoran la traducción:
Y LUCÍAN LAS ESTRELLAS
Y lucían las estrellas,
y olía la tierra
chirriaba la puerta del huerto
y un paso rozaba la arena.
Entraba ella, fragante,
me caía en los brazos.
¡Oh dulces besos, oh lánguidas caricias
mientras yo, tembloroso, la bella figura liberaba de velos!
Se esfumó para siempre mi sueño de amor.
¡El instante ha volado y muero desesperado!
¡Y nunca he amado tanto la vida!
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