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Translation
I Don't Look Up
A soul torn open/away,
worth more than smoke-vapor.
A circle rowing to the end again,
A new beginning always so (in)tense
Some time has passed,
From a distance1, you can't hear
the voice of the heart or the echo of love anymore.
No winds are blowing from there.
From a distance, you can't see nor hear [it] anymore.
These days I'm not looking up
I'm a blue vapour2.
This dance is our last
My heart has sunk into a bog.
I still lose myself when I see you.
The blue of your eyes.
This dance is our last.
The skies sinking into the water.
These days I don't look up.
I'm a blue vapour.
This dance is our last
My heart has sunk into a bog.
I still lose myself when I see you.
The blue of your eyes.
This dance is our last.
The skies sinking into the water.
Your skies sinking into the water.
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Submitted by 
nykti-eoikuia on 2017-03-07
nykti-eoikuia on 2017-03-07Added in reply to request by 
laylania
laylania Last edited by nykti-eoikuia on 2019-02-17
nykti-eoikuia on 2019-02-17✕
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