English translation

Apologies for coming off as rude, it wasn't my intention at all. i was just curious on OPS translation methods, as whenever reading off their work it seems inaccurate/a little off, coming from a standpoint of the original lyrics. The way it's translated feels kind of odd to me, ill state some lines;

One thing I notice is that with the Japanese lyrics of how they formatted it, the ending part is put into a different line, so it reads as though its not part of the original line ( 虚構のコラージュを 貼るよ 貼るよ 貼るよ 貼るよ rather than 虚構のコラージュを 貼るよ 貼るよ 貼るよ 貼るよ) which imo, makes it harder to read.

Next, the lines during the kind of breaks during the song are translated in a way that doesnt really fit with the choppiness imo "虚構の 虚構の 貼るよ 貼るよ" - "I'll paste, I'll paste, a collage of fiction, collage of fiction" technically, the line "虚構の" translates to just fiction, as the collage part is not mentioned, and i dont think that really needs to be said PERSONALLY. Also, fiction comes first, and with the choppiness of the song, i think it's fine to leave fiction at the start, even if its not grammatically correct, as again, it is chopped up.

The same can be said for the rest of the break part, with "天使 天使 貼るよ".

For the next line, "薔薇 薔薇 薔薇 薔薇" I'm not sure where the "a bunch of" comes from, as nowhere in the line is it stated really the quantity from what I can tell (I mean, I'm also not fluent so maybe there IS something I'm missing, but from what I can see, it doesn't seem like that.)

Now, with the choppiness of the song, it seems like OP miight have not taken the original lyrics into mind when translating this part, of course, I can't speak for them, but it seems to me like the line "生きるため" is translated oddly. "For the sake of living" doesn't seem right to me. Going off a translation ive already seen, the original line being "生きるため立ち寄った美術館のセザンヌに" which what I've seen is translated as "At the Cezanne museum where I stopped to live" wouldn't this line better translate as "to live" ? I mean, of course it is personal preference, but it seems like making a entire line out of a part chopped up doesn't make much sense to me personally.

Now, since this next line is reversed and cut I can understand where a lot of confusion can arise. The original lyric "たっだうそとっき" reversed back to "きっとそうだった" translating to "I know I did" or "I'm sure of it" depending on context makes more sense to me PERSONALLY than "Like this, I'll be stained red forever!" which to me, even from the original full line "赤ずっと塗り込んだ バカ きっとそうだった" has no correlation. Again, maybe I'm translating it wrong, and if that's the case, forgive me.

Thats the end of what I'm going to say at the moment since I'm pretty busy right now, but this is how I see things, and I hope this give more detail onto my thoughts of why I think this translation is inaccurate instead of my previous comment of no detail, thanks :)