Hélène Obratnova
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If you were here
Sometimes I think of you,
Whilst in the car
The journey is the worst of it,
If it so happens
That a song brings back a memory,
The unanswered questions
Are the worst part of all
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
What would you say
If you were still here?
These things, are they signs that you're sending for me?
What would you do
If you were still here?
I tell myself stories,
To fall asleep
To put my pain to sleep,
And make myself smile
I have imaginary conversations,
With those who are no longer on the earth
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
What would you say
If you were still here?
These things, are they signs that you're sending for me?
What would you do
If you were still here?
I don't care if they're worried
That I can't cope
I know you're there, not far,
Even if it's delusional
Delusional people are supposed to make the armour melt away
And make people cry,
Whilst in the car
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
What would you say
If you were still here?
These things, are they signs that you're sending for me?
What would you do
If you were still here?
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gabrieljohn 2017-10-28
gabrieljohn 2017-10-28Dernière modification par gabrieljohn 2018-09-12
gabrieljohn 2018-09-12✕
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Commentaires
Hélène Obratnova
Sam, 11/11/2017 - 10:26
Ka Wai Ng gabrieljohn
Sam, 08/09/2018 - 08:06
oui mais si je lavais changer pour etre plus naturel en anglais la traduction naurait elle pas perdu le message de la chanson? je peux rouvrir la fonction d'edition si ta des idees, ou des changements que ta envie de faire :)
gabrieljohn
Dim, 09/09/2018 - 09:26
J'ai essayé de faire la plupart des changements mais entre ceux que t'as donné il y a certains avec qui je suis pas totalement d'accord. Par exemple, 'Whilst in the car' voudrait dire selon moi que la voiture est en fait en train de se deplacer. 'T'es la pas loin' je traduirais comme ça en anglais car ça a du sens en anglais aussi et retient la cadence de la chanson. Dernierement je ne sais pas s'il y a vraiment une bonne façon de traduire 'Est-ce que ces sont des signes que tu m'envoies' en anglais, et je crois que, malgré que ma traduction soit un peu awkward, les tiennes le sont aussi. Je crois que c'est à cause du mot 'des' qui est essentiel en français pour separer 'ces' et 'signes,' mais qui ne peut pas se traduire en anglais d'une maniere naturelle en ce contexte, donc j'ai utilisé des elements de ma traduction et des tiennes. En plus, actuellement la site du web ne me permet pas de faire des changements (Je vais essayer de nouveau plus tard,) mais avec les changements que t'as recommendés, je suis tout à fait d'accord que c'est plus naturelle. La voici:
Sometimes I think of you,
Whilst in the car
The journey is the worst of it,
If it so happens
That a song brings back a memory,
The unanswered questions
Are the worst part of all
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
What would you say
If you were still here?
These things, are they signs that you're sending for me?
What would you do
If you were still here?
I tell myself stories,
To fall asleep
To put my pain to sleep,
And make myself smile
I have imaginary conversations,
With those who are no longer on the earth
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
What would you say
If you were still here?
These things, are they signs that you're sending for me?
What would you do
If you were still here?
I don't care if they're scared
That I can't hold out
I know you're there, not far,
Even if it's delusional
Delusional people are supposed to make the armour melt away
And make people cry,
Whilst in the car
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
What would you say
If you were still here?
These things, are they signs that you're sending for me?
What would you do
If you were still here?
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