evfokas
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Sáb, 29/03/2014 - 12:43
Thank you, Evan.
let me tell you:
1. First two verses - "del amor", "no dura más que un momento"; "...del amor, dura..."
2. Next stanza - "me dejó y tomó otro" (preterite- no 'un')
3. Long stanza - "...sigue fluyendo", "...haya cambiado" (subjunctive)
I am not going to touch the English version. It seems to be fine.
Did you edited the original? Thanks again. My thanks to azucarinho, as well.
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