Stormy Night
Thu, 04/02/2021 - 22:51
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Original lyrics
گل‌واژه
وقتی که من عاشق می‌شم
دنیا برام رنگ دیگه‌س
صبح خروس‌خونش برام
انگار یه آهنگ دیگه‌س
وقتی که من عاشق می‌شم
ترانه‌هام عاشق‌ترن
گل‌واژه‌های شعر من
رنگ گلا رو می‌برن
عشق واسه من یه معجزه‌ست، تو لحظه‌های بی‌امید
تو صبح سردم، مثل طلوع خورشید
فصل شکوفایی شعر تو باغ احساس منه
ناجی قلبم، عشقه بدون تردید
وقتی که من عاشق می‌شم
دنیا برام رنگ دیگه‌س
صبح خروس‌خونش برام
انگار یه آهنگ دیگه‌س
وقتی که من عاشق می‌شم
ترانه‌هام عاشق‌ترن
گل‌واژه‌های شعر من
رنگ گلا رو می‌برن
- خروس‌خون:
خروس خوان . [ خ ُ خوا / خا ] (اِ مرکب ) قبل از سَحَر. پاس ِ اخیر شب . آخر شب see https://www.vajehyab.com/dehkhoda/خروس+خوان
- گل‌واژه:
(Gol-vāje) means a beautiful word. The literal translation would be 'blossom-word'; a word so beautiful and perfect that is compared to a blossom
- گل‌واژه:
This is a genitive case (noun+noun). The word-for-word translation is 'flower [of a] term'. In English, 'rose' has the same connotation and use as 'flower' in Persian literature. Maybe because it is short and sweet, the same way its Persian counterpart is in Persian. For ex. the title of Saadi’s famous book, Gulistan (word-for-word: ‘ a place of flowers’) is usually translated into ‘The Rose Garden’ in English. A native English might convey the same concept as 'word sweet as roses". Rose here is used as in the phrase “a rose by any other name ” https://literarydevices.net/a-rose-by-any-other-name/
Submitted by Stormy Night on 2013-11-11
Stormy Night on 2013-11-11Last edited by 
Razq on 2023-05-20
Razq on 2023-05-20Translation
The Blossom of the Words
When I fall in love
I see the world in different colours
Even the crowing of the rooster at the break of dawn
Sounds different to me
When I fall in love
My songs are more amorous
The blossoms of my poem's words
Make the flowers look pale
Love is like a miracle for me at the most desperate moments
(Love) is like the rising of the sun on my coldest day
(Love is like) the spring of my garden of emotions, when my poems blossom
The saviour of my heart is the love, indeed
When I fall in love
I see the world in different colours
Even the crowing of the rooster at the break of dawn
Sounds different to me
When I fall in love
My songs are more amorous
The blossoms of my poem's words
Make the flowers look pale
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Submitted by 
bijan.kardouni on 2014-11-06
bijan.kardouni on 2014-11-06Last edited by bijan.kardouni on 2023-10-07
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Stormy Night
Thu, 04/02/2021 - 22:51
About translator
Lyrics by: Mansoor Tehrāni
Composed and arranged by: Sādegh Nojooki
ترانه: منصور تهرانی
آهنگ و تنظیم: صادق نوجوکی