Κακομάζαλη
Thu, 28/09/2023 - 15:21
I believe that in this case is imperative to keep the nouns capitalized just like in the german original text.
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Klaarzin on 2023-09-25
Κακομάζαλη
Thu, 28/09/2023 - 15:21
I believe that in this case is imperative to keep the nouns capitalized just like in the german original text.
Κακομάζαλη
Sat, 30/09/2023 - 13:57
Yes, I know that. Don't you see the need of capitalization of certain nouns in this poem? Not quotation marks. Capital letters. Let's try something.
"I'm so afraid of the word of people.
They pronounce everything so clearly:
And this is called Dog and that's called House,
and here's the Outset and the End is there.
I fear their sense, their mockery play,
they know everything, what will be and was;
not any Mountain is still wondrous to them;
their Garden and Good are right next to God.
I ever want to preserve and warn: Keep off.
The singing of things I love to hear so much.
But if you touch them, they are rigid and dumb.
You're finishing off all the things for me"
....hmm? Do you see it?
Klaarzin
Tue, 03/10/2023 - 08:51
What I can see, is that some of the nouns stand out: dog and house, outset and end, garden, good and god, but not: mountain. If one capitalizes them, one gives them a mocking aspect. I hesitated over whether Rilke intended to mock people in general, who use common words for things.
Because it is rather peculiar to experience displeasure, fear even, when people call things by their common name. Why would the use of common words for things make you afraid? Rilke must have been aware that he stands alone in his displeasure. But that doesn't preclude an intention to ridicule. After a few days of hesitation I am convinced.
So, thank you very much for your suggestion, Flora.
kind regards,
Michel
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