michealt
Devin_Elisabeth
kifbender
Jeu, 03/11/2016 - 22:56
There were a few things in the translation I noticed - overall good translation but I wanted to offer the following observations:
Chorus:
-I have always interpreted the line "Y fue un laberinto, que me llevo a tu dirección" as meaning "And it was a maze/labyrinth, that brought me to your address" literally, meaning "to your front door."
-reincidente in my opinion would be better translated as "reoffending"
Verse 2:
-While it's true that "No se en quien me has convertido" literally translates to "I don't know who you turned me into" I feel like in English it would be better to express this as "I don't know WHAT you have turned me into" since who just seems a bit weird to me.
Overall this was a great translation - sorry if it seems like I'm nitpicking. Just wanted to offer a few of my observations!
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