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Cari-Cari
Finding
Don't, keep yourself silent anymore
Finding, you need to find
If, you are still here
Hoping, the colour of rainbow
Tell, and praise yourself
But still, you are still here
Don't, you blame later
Jealousy, that ruins yourself
Open the eyes, and look into yourself
Open the mind, find the self-problem
Jealousy, controling the heart
Will be, weapons that destroy yourself
Finding, you need to find
Don't, you dreaming
Impossibly, it will
The moon falls, on you
Don't, keep yourself silent anymore
Finding, what you need to find
If, you are still here
Hoping, the colour of rainbow
Tell, and praise yourself
But still, you are still here
Don't, you blame later
Jealousy, that ruins yourself
Open the eyes, and look into yourself
Open the mind, find the self-problem
Jealousy, controling the heart
Will be, weapons that destroy yourself
Finding, you need to find
Don't, you dreaming
Impossibly, it will
The moon falls, on you
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saeid2024
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Commentaires 1
Thanks
It's good, but maybe too literal
You better remove most of those commas, and make it smoother
You don't even have to keep all the words in the line they belong to
Just keep the *number* of lines in every verse, and translate smoothly