אלוהים נתן לך במתנה (Elohim natan lecha bematana) - traduction en italien

My friend, I am so sorry to be forced to write public comments to you. I tried to send you a private message, but you disabled PMs receiving and blocked everyone from sending you PMs.
I think you are doing good work with your translations Hebrew > Italian and vice versa, it’s a language pair that only a few people know. So you are also building a bridge between two different cultures, and I highly appreciate it. Also, I like this kind of songs.
But I’m afraid most of your translations are largely based on GT or other automatic translators, which is not allowed on this website.
As you requested proofreading, I will help you as regards the accuracy of the Italian phrasing.
But I strongly recommend you not to use any automatic tool in the future.
So:
Grande cosa, cosa meravigliosa > Una gran cosa, una cosa meravigliosa
Amore la speranza > L’amore, la speranza
Estate, inverno, autunno, primavera > Add an article before each season: L’estate, l’inverno, l’autunno, la primavera
guardarsi > guardarti
Please notice that there is a difference between “una buona anima” and “un’anima buona”: the first means a well-formed soul; the latter means a good soul (in the sense of kind, gentle)
Fiori e alberi sbocciano (blooming flowers and trees) > Alberi e fiori che sbocciano (in italian, the verb “sbocciare” can be used for flowers but not for trees). Or else, you can say: Fiori e alberi fioriti (meaning trees covered with flowers)
Cielo, luna, stelle > Il cielo, la luna e le stelle (normally, singular nouns require an article)
vacanze > giorni di festa
Mani e testa > Le mani e la testa
cose così belle > delle cose bellissime
Mettere i bambini nel mondo > Mettere al mondo i figli
guardare > vedere (you can say “guardare” when you are looking/whatching/staring something)