Viola Ortes
Tue, 20/06/2017 - 14:35
Good job, but not perfect. See translation #3 with the correction I made. Keep on working!
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Viola Ortes
Tue, 20/06/2017 - 14:35
Good job, but not perfect. See translation #3 with the correction I made. Keep on working!
Nicos Zafiris
Fri, 15/10/2021 - 23:15
How about 'innocence' for 'candor'?
David Leland
Wed, 13/12/2023 - 04:01
Pureness? Native English speakers would say "purity"
I think this approaches the proper meaning of the song....