I liked , it’s very close to original russian version. Although the russian version was not an original too.
The original was on Avar language and then was translated to Russian
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White Cranes
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Sometimes I dream that every fallen soldier
Who on blood-soaked battlefield remained
Did not end up a piece of cannon fodder
But turned into a beautiful white crane
'Till present day they soar high above us
Mournfully making their solemn call
Perhaps that's why, with quiet sadness
Gazing at them makes silence fall
The tired flock flies in a wedge formation
Into the fog, as day and night become the same
I see a tiny gap, despite the elevation
Maybe this is a place that I can claim
One future day, as a majestic crane
In bluish haze across the sky I'll glide
My somber bird calls will not be in vain
They will find those who were left behind
Sometimes I dream that every fallen soldier
Who on blood-soaked battlefield remained
Did not end up a piece of cannon fodder
But turned into a beautiful white crane
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
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trotta.gnam on 2020-08-23
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David Ephraim on Sat, 15/03/2025 - 13:14
David Ephraim on Sat, 15/03/2025 - 13:14Author's comments:
These are truly mesmerizing lyrics, in Russian. Not sure if my attempt does them justice.
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Журавли
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trotta.gnam
Mon, 01/03/2021 - 16:06
True... I found a Russian version that seems closer to the Avar original:
https://lyricstranslate.com/en/comment/820714
The lyrics are a bit different.
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